Friday, January 20, 2012

Stories of the Week

The Sick Child, Edvard Munch (1907).
Here are three flash stories that caught my imagination from the December 2011 issue of Apollo's Lyre. All address the relationship between parents and their children.

Madeline Mora-Summonte's "Silent Night" tells about a family Christmas palpably silenced by loss. The writing is beautiful and subtle. The running comparison with Christmas past is powerful. Don't read this if you're already feeling depressed. I particularly liked  Mora-Summonte's description of death:

[Death] slunk into her room, the house, our lives. He slithered under her skin and into her blood. He wrapped himself around her small bones, hugged her heart, and squeezed her lungs until she gasped her last breath.

Stephanie M. Lorée's clever science fiction tale "Three Winters" tells of loss and silence in a family separated by light years. She tells her story in three sections, each with a different point-of-view from a different generation. The section headings spell out the oft-used phrase: Home Away From Home.

Shane Gavin's "Climbing ‘til Doomsday" describes a young boy's struggle to escape from the dark. It's at night, when he's in bed, that his parents fight and he can hear the screaming. If he can reach the sky, he believes he can rip it open and release the day hidden behind the blackness. His efforts to reach the sky are comic at first, but then turn tragic. I don't think I'll ever look at the night sky in quite the same way again.

I didn’t hate mom and dad, though, no, I hated the dark--the sky outside that hid the day and brought on the screaming. But the sky outside was broken and punctures in the black shroud revealed glimpses of the day hidden behind it.

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  1. Great stuff, fo sho! And all Write1Sub1 tales, no less.

  2. Some great stories there, no question.

  3. Jeff, thank you so much for highlighting "Silent Night." It's one of those stories that means a lot to me and I'm glad it spoke to you.

  4. Hi Jeff! Thanks so much for commenting on THREE WINTERS. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to include it in your blog post. Have a great day!

  5. Wow, thanks for the mention, Jeff. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. Cheers.